Final Assessment

Dear Maya,
Your blog is wonderful. You have interesting ideas and I can see that you put a lot of effort into it. You still need to use the spellcheck with your work. It isn't hard and it will make a big difference.
Your final grade is 95.
Yours,
Karen Noll Stanger

Reflection

On the last assignment I did very much enjoy writing the last book report.
I enjoyed it because I finally knew that this is going to be the last book we are going to have to read.
I prefer the regular way to do a book report because it takes less time then this way. Ilike to finish reports early because less presure.
I think it wasn't worthwhile to spend so much time on the assignments because we could of finished the assigments much earlier. Although the assigments helped me alot correcting my grammer.
I learned that there are fun ways to do assigments other than write on a paper.
I do suggest we continue with this type of learning because it doesn't waste paper.

Questions

1) Why did Deenie's mother choose that name for her daughter?
2) Why does Deenie's mother want her to be a model?
3) Who are Deenie's best friends?
4) How does Deenie discover that she has a back problem?
5) Why didn't Deenie's mother push her older sister to be a model?
6) Does Deenie really want to be a model?
7) How does Deenie deal with wearing a back brace?
8) How do Deenie's friends react to her back problem?
9) How long does Deenie have to wear the brace?
10) Why doesn't Deenie have an operation instead of wearing a brace?
11) Who does Deenie feel closer to? her mother or her father?
12) Who is Aunt Rae?
13) Why did the vice-principal want to see her after school?
14) Why does Deenie's father join the Y?
15) What is Deenie's favourite hobby? Why?

Enter the book

The things I'll need if I'll join to the charcters in the story are:
Clothes, shoes, hair dryer and more beutty stuff because of her mother that cares a lot of beutty.
Tooth brush, hair brush, underwears and more necessary stuff for living in a house.
And money for all the shopping that the girls doing there.

Diary

Deenie's diary:
Dear diary,
Yesterday Janet and Midge took me shopping and to a movie. It was so much fun.
Actually I didn't even know we were going to spend money on clothes. I thought that we were just going to eat lunch and see a movie.
So they bought me a nice nightie for the hospital.
Then we went to lunch but they wouldn't let me pay for anything even though I had money.
Then we went to the movie. Midge went out to the lobby to buy more popcorn and when she came back she whispered 'I just saw Buddy Brader and Steve Hildrick'.
And then just when the movie began I saw Buddy sitting next to me. I was really nervous when he started to put his arm around my chair so I looked at him and he took his arm and put it on my shoulder!
Then Steve asked me to change seats with him. I guess he asked that because he liked Janet.
At the time I was closer to Buddy.He reached down for my hand.
As soon as the movie was over we all walked outside together. It was the best time ever!

Dear Maya

Hi! I really like your work especially since I know it is really truly yours. BUT because it is yours you really need to check and recheck your writing. You need to learn to do this yourself but for now you should get help from someone. Please make corrections through your blog.
Well Done!
Karen

The ending

My new ending is:

After Deenie arrives at the party, Buddy comes over to her. He invites her to join him. However, Deenie understands that she isn't really in love with Buddy. She realizes that the movie has influenced her. When she goes with him into the room, she tells him how she feels. Buddy behaves very disrespectly to her. He laughs at her and calls her a baby. Deenie understands that she has made a mistake. After she leaves the party, she meets a nice kid in the doctor's office who has the same back problem as her. She starts to hang out with him. After a few month, Deenie discoveres that she loves her new friend Tommy because they have so much in common.